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It is true! My first drafts are usually are my final drafts and when that happens they suck. I absolutely HATE looking back at my papers when I know they were mediocre essays and yeah, I have yet to look at the RA you handed back to me... I'm scared of it! And I do, I do lack structure and I find trouble putting my observations, interpretations, and ideas down in a coherent flow. I feel like sometimes I got something going on and I understand the meaning of whatever we are watching/hearing/reading as far as the deeper message goes, but then I feel like I really don't know...

However, the website looks awesome, and I think it will do me a world of good. It's the same one you used for your visual syllabus, isn't it? I'll definitely be using it tonight if I can figure out how it works in time. Now, off to attempt meh reepourtingz for jer class gypxie! Var Nice!!!